by sasafrass
I loved this story, I think it's great! It's very well written and I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Keep up the great work!
I just loved it when she gotten impregnated! You write really good and I'm gonna check more frequent on the things you write!! Keep writing like this, I love it!
I can only hope you continue the story it was very erotic ans well written
Very well done!! Hanging on every word. Please continue this storyline if at all possible. Thank you.
Please write another part where he visits her again when she is pregnant with his child. I love pregnant sex. hmmm
This was an excellent story, Hope you continue on with this story.
This wasnt' one of those cheesy vampire stories..it was actually very well written. It was hot, erotic but personal. It gave a realistic approach to it. Well done.