by lovetoreadXXX16
I liked the psychology and background. It made it all the hotter. Please write more. Don't listen to the haters who pick on one embellishment or flaw. Keep writing.
I also enjoyed reading your story. It was great. More depth than a lot of stories.
Keep writing.
I submitted another chapter but it is taking a long time to go through the approval process. It will be under non-consent not BDSM. Feedback only encourages me to continue!!