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All Comments on 'One Day It Happened'

by KGB1979

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Corpse_riderCorpse_riderover 12 years ago
Happening

Very good. Well written. Strong characterisation and descriptive writing. A well crafted short story.

KGB1979KGB1979over 12 years agoAuthor
Want more Sophie and Trevor?

If you like this story please check out "Staying Late Pays Off" where they meet again. Some say they like the second story even better than the first. Would love to know what you all think. THANKS FOR READING!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Cool!

This was a really good and well written story. Keep writing, it was exciting, just the right amount of dominance!

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