All Comments on 'One Fine Day Ch. 01'

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kokshurkokshurover 19 years ago
HOT FOOT SEX

Enjoyed the pacing, the back and forth, really enjoyed the seduction with the feet and footwear. The happy ending was good too. a few typos. you might want to proofread your next story more carefully.

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