All Comments on 'One Fine Mess Ch. 05'

by Twisted_Little_Sister

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MizTMizTabout 12 years ago
End?

is this the end or does the story go on from here? The "Mess" has ended thanks to her powers. Good has prevailed over evil. So yes the story has ended. But have their adventures ended?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

You did a really good job on the whole series and I liked the mystery at the beginning but I feel your detail on the small things like the colors of the rooms for example I also like the character build up and background good job I hope you write more

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