by Rob Conner
things that make no sense to me:
1. Liela got 'drugged' into being a slut, but recovers from drugs within a a week of going whore for George. she leaves George - but stays a prostitute!
why? millions of women in LA who do not have great job skills find other work. but she had to STAY a whore for 3+ years? she clearly desired to do it.
2. the emotions do not fit - they were 'drifting apart', seperated on his part without too much pain, years apart, and then they leap into each others arms like newlyweds on meeting? i couldn't swallow it. the author set it up poorly.
maybe if there had been WEEKS of dating and romancing, or if we readers had some indication that ex-s had been pining away and keeping in contact. but as it was written, the whole get together felt forced, out of left field.
3. in part 01, the husband was strong. now in part two it is 'marry me. i know you have needs i cannot satisfy, i will be a cuck, you can slut around.'
she doesn't take him up on it, until Beth comes, but it still ruins the ex-husband - it is like he had a noodle transplanted for a backbone!
and then the hypocracy - they can't live together, hubby thinks it is wrong, but they can be re-married and the ex-wife gets to slut around for her 'needs'. huh?
this had possibilities, but the holes are too big for me.
Absolutely Wonderful!!!!!!!!!
Wonderful, love happy endings like this, and NO wimps allowed here MAN!!!!
The man is the MAN, with imperfections, the woman is the WOMAN, with imperfections as well...LOVED IT!!
Will read more of your stories.
Yes a Great Story i wouldnt mind that kind of loyalty.
with a slave like Beth.
with on the previous story. If I overcome my objections to the previous story and just read this one it is a good story up to the point where she choses to bring in a whore for them to have a threesome with. People are who they associate with, she choses to stay with whores and identifies with them. Trash is trash. You could very easily improve the story by having the slut madam close her business and move in with them as both of their lovers but women into the escort game are really into money being power over men, not sex. They somehow equate making money from men, and sometimes women, with being sexy and successful. They are like the very rich people who could never spend all they have but feel the urge to make more and more. It is actually a form of mental illness of some type, being driven into such obcessions. So it would be very hard to get, was it Beth, to give up her all important business for something so basic as love.
Just a fairy tale like in the movie "Pretty Woman" but without the humor.
I thought the other one was bad but this was much worse.
He deserves to eat cum out her cunt... This writer has a guys name.. But he is nothing but a bitch...stupid fucking cuck
For a humorous fantasy about a disgusting whore and the man who loved her AFTER she was a whore for three years having left him for big dicks.
Hahaha! Stupidity reigns.
Sorry, but this story was just plain bad.... Woman turns paid whore leaving family, yet he bends over backwards to bring her back???? Garbage that this author even had the husband apologize by end of this garbage.....?
if you read part one you had a damn good idea what part two would be like. If you had a problem with part one don't read part two MORON.
Like the story alot. The ending was a little off. Would have like it end with just them. MoreMore please.
fucking 2 women who have screwed 100's if not 1000's of cocks....shit
Didn't think it as possible to be worse than part one, but you did I it.