All Comments on 'One Hot Summer'

Story didn't seem to end with a real conclusion. You should keep it going. Bring in other dominant MILF's on the street in further chapters.

I usually dont read stories in this catagory. For some reason I read yours and ma I gladk that I did. You have the beginnings of a real classic here. Please continue and take this boy through his paces.

for the Femdom man hating woman and innocent boy stories.

As for me, her house would accidently burn down with her in it.

Really, really needs an editor. Too many words missing. Destroys flow.

I loved the story, but you could use an editor to clean up the problems.

Keep writing!

Please write more. If you look up my name, you can read stories in a similar vein.

It is a wonderful story of enslavement by a mature woman. I am curious to see how far she will take her slave!