All Comments on 'One Last Gangbang Pt. 02'

Another wonderful chapter!

5

Loved this chapter but I could read your stuff all night. Looking forward to the next and maybe a 4 or 5 after that. Keep writing, Dude, your fans await with bated breath!

Cheers

SAGE

Yeah, tell me about how stories can take on a life of their own. The characters get into your blood and you simply cannot get them out until you do them justice. I'm "borrowing" the line about living in the past will cost you the future, by the way.

5 stars

Very nice story ! 5 stars

Storyteller.

Feel free to borrow, I don't mind sharing. I know the saying isn't original. It's something my late father used to say, and it stuck with me. It's also 100% true.

Loved the first chapter but this one seemed to read more like a owners manual than a romance. I still liked it and I'm hoping the next chapter is as good as the first one. I do see a problem, it's the elephant under the bed so to speak. At some point Karen's past will have to be delt with and for a mirage to work, it probably should be sooner. You can't build trust on a lie. Just hope that Paul is willing to over look the past and live for the future as Elvis implied.

Easy read but not much plot progression. Relationship interaction between Les and Karen is a little awkward, bordering on bizarre at times. Seems like sometimes in your effort to explain Karen's new life and world view that you lose the subtleties associated we would expect from "normal" characters that surround her. Better hurry with the story, 410A is being phased out - LOL! 3.8*

R717

The fish fry sounded like when I lived in Wisconsin. Every Friday. I remember that rye bread was so good. Great story.

Lisa

Loved the storyline so far. A wee bit staid compared to the usual stuff on Literotica. Do consider throwing in a few 'crumbs' if you plan to go into additional chapters, maybe a flashback on the lady's past ?

Great chapter, hope read many more. 5 stars again.

As I got to the end of this chapter I was hoping there would not be a quick rush to end things to keep it in 3 chapters. Thanks for giving these characters their fair share of time

Great story - love the pacing. Please don’t rush to the end and wrap it up too quickly. Karen and Les deserve their time to get to know each other and build their love. Way too often the author builds a great lead up and finishes way too soon. Follow your gut (and heart) and let the story and characters go where they want. Thanks!

Enjoying the story.

I'm sorry. I completely missed out on the first chapter because I read the first few paragraphs of it and really didn't want to experience it. When the second chapter dropped I started reading it and found myself intrigued. Intrigued enough to go back an read the first chapter completely and I'm glad I did. Good story and well written. 5*

I absolutely loved part 1. Karen is an amazing character.

Well, she still is. And more to the point, look at what the storyteller is doing to develop the rest of her.

As far as I'm concerned, the storyteller could keep throwing Karen into situations and I'd be happy to watch how she handles them. But this is a story, meaning a beginning (what a great beginning), a middle (I'm thoroughly enjoying) and an ending, which I greatly anticipate.

Keep it coming, I'm having a great time.

THANKS

I’m really enjoying this storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love the storyline, great writing!

Excellent continuation. I'm loving your story. I'm glad to hear a few more chapters are on the way. 5stars

It gets better with every part you release.

I liked it. I'm a retired Nebraska farmer and could relate to the tales of crops and livestock. Lester is very much a typical Nebraska farm boy, slightly bashful, all gentleman but cetatinly knows what he is looking for. I doubt that her past will be a problem for him, but he will want full disclosure. ( and like Lisa, the Friday night fish fry was definately date night)

Very good set up for the crisis ahead. Lester is going to freak finds out about her past as a prostitute. What will be most interesting is what he does after the initial shock. 5 stars so far!

Not going to lie, I was more curious and wasn't sure if I would even read the 1st part. I have read pretty much all of your writings and have always liked them hence the decision to read it, albeit with skepticism that being said was very pleased I did and find myself anticipating its continuing. Great job

She better come clean with him. If she does, he'll get through it. If he finds out on his own....

Looking forward to next part. Agree with other comments: she’d better come clean about her past

Nothings happened so I'll rate it 3*. I had hoped that next episode would tidy this up because it's about as exciting as watching paint dry. I'm debating if it's worth it to continue with a three part story, but I'm pretty sure this style isn't worth my time for 4 parts, let alone 5.

Whew! Looking forward to the remaining parts. 5 stars for the first two chapters. It is nice to read a story on literotica that is "cute" and "homey". My personal opinion is to NOT divulge her past. It died when she left the east coast. Let her start her future fresh. If she needs a "past", just let be a bad breakup with an old boyfriend.

She just has to learn how to be a farmgirl type living in the midwest with a loving husband. Or maybe I am watching The Hallmark Channel too much. Whatever.

Wonderful, 10 stars here, too. Karen may be headed to change her name... Mrs. Karen, then MOMMY. A loving husband meets a loving wife and they have a loving family. AS of now, she's a whore no more. This may be not totally fiction...EXCELLENT SERIES!!!

I enjoy romances and read for the story line. I feel you are doing all the things to make a good story. 10K range per chapter. Good plot. Good character development. NO glaring errors.

Just amazed at the negative comments considering the quality of the story.

The Hoary Cleric

Another Great Chapter

nope, romance and gangbangs? Pretty much polar opposites of each other. Nobody wants a cum dumpster for a love interest. Just gross.

I have read the first two chapters and that is where I am stopping. No real adversity/struggle in the story to keep it interesting. Just flat.