All Comments on 'One Last Lesson'

by Soma99

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Booboobear84Booboobear84about 4 years ago
liked the build up

I know your audience has expectations, but I think you denigrated the build up needlessly. It worked well.

BrAvHeArTBrAvHeArTabout 4 years ago
Another hit

Beautiful details, great story line. This was another fun read!

BrAvHeArTBrAvHeArTabout 4 years ago
Another creative piece

Beautiful details, great story line. This was a fun read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story!

This is a good one, Soma. The build up was worth it! But I guarantee Holden would have been up for a round three! 🙂

Fit_2_Be_TiedFit_2_Be_Tiedalmost 4 years ago

"Gary Galloway had sent a video of himself cumming onto his own face to Tonya Brown's older brother instead of her and that is why he had a black eye for prom."

Love this detail, it cracked me up :) There was always some crazy classroom theory for something like this true or not and its just the sort of thing she'd hear getting discussed. I enjoyed the story :)

PG564EPG564Eover 3 years ago

I liked the sexual gossip of the students, and Angela's hidden reaction to all of this sex. And how Angela destroyed Holden's virginity with a fuck and a blowjob.

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