All Comments on 'One Little World Ch. 08'

another wonderful chapter and you have me waiting in suspense for more... ~violetflower

This really is one of the best stories I have read. There are so many twists and turns going on where you leave the reader sitting there with their mind going in many different directions. You have totally hooked me in....

While Shannon's submission is intoxicating, James' Dominance is more so. You have woven characters who seem to have deeper stories waiting to be told: how they evolved into who they are now. I hope that you will share that part of the story also.