All Comments on 'One Look Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

hope you have more on this one

sowet4Daddysowet4Daddyover 5 years ago
So Good

Love this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Love it!! Really want to read more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Worth it

This has been a very touching series, well-worth reading. It brought tears to my eyes, wishing I could experience such a great love in my own life. Thanks for sharing.

Experiment1512Experiment1512about 5 years ago
Fun story

You need to continue this story line!! Next chapter, don’t leave out the part where her toes her hands and takes her hard!

TheNotoriousDUDETheNotoriousDUDEabout 5 years ago
I need more of this!

Please continue this story, it's absolutely amazing! :)

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Still Rolling Along Nicely

Perhaps you should have dragged out her agony week a little longer and ended the chapter as she left Roxanne and went to her boss' office.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Why didn’t she ask him about gia when they were in the car on way back from junk trip she’s a very mixed up girl it normally toughens up people who have come from foster homes

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

His friends Bruce and Steve are rich buff bastards!!

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