All Comments on 'One Lucky Guy'

please, your first story, make it your last.

Great story... well-written. This story is much better than most of the garbage that gets posted here. It's not too short, not too long, with a good plot and great sex. Thanks for sharing.

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Thought it was a great short story - he wanna & she wanna & they both got it. Nothing wrong with that, as they say what you don't know won't hurt you. Looking for more on this story.!! Thanks.

How did he get the thigh high stockings off before the VERY TIGHT jeans??????????????

How did he get the thigh high stockings off before the VERY TIGHT jeans??????????????

with the order of clothing removal then the erotic story itself. Not a bad story, wondering why all the negative comments with "0" scores. But then I always forget the critics on this site are tough, expecting professional novelists, instead of amateur writers. ML

....maybe when an author can't even portray physically possible actions it shows how little effort they've put into story?-pistolpackinpete

Loved it!

Hated it.

Wasn't That a cute little story? Be sure to tell the wife about your adventure.

But I did -- 5*

Uhhh did it need to end on a cliffhanger