All Comments on 'One More Sunset Pt. 01'

Honestly, this is describing what I've always wanted in a relationship, but dreams are dreams. Love itttt and love savannah and the movie nerd stuff. I cant wait to learn more about these cuties. These two are cute, but i want real chemistry here. Reallllly excited to read more!

Great beginnning

Fun things in store in this blossoming relationship it sounds like.... <3

Nice slow build up, good dialog! Looking forward to the next installment.