All Comments on 'One More Time'

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MigbirdMigbirdabout 1 year ago

Well done; just enough character development. Nice dialogue in and around erotic moments. As a near hopeless romantic liked your storyline.

Jlyn1Jlyn1about 1 year ago

Love prevails. ☺️

DanDraperDanDraper12 months ago

Wonderful story. 5-stars.

NoTalentHackNoTalentHack12 months ago

That was really wonderfully sweet.

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