All Comments on 'One More Year Ch. 18'

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BlowPopJBlowPopJover 2 years ago

My word! Bradley Bradley Bradley, what are you doing to me? Poor Eric getting shut down and Jay is just all over the place

readerfeederreaderfeederover 2 years ago

Oh, Jay Jay Jay. So messy! Eric continues to be obliviously self-centred and the worst, but in this instance Jay certainly isn't blameless. Hope Jay learns some self-control!

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Whole lot of "brutal" ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I do like that Eric is really and finally declaring his love for Jay…I thought it maybe even be possible he knew at the restaurant after his father left, but maybe Nick solidified Eric’s feelings (and realizing he’s honestly jealous about Jamie). He sure picked a rough time to say it for Jay to process it though. Seams that Jay is certainly starting to realize he doesn’t have similar feelings for Jamie either. I hope poor Louis doesn’t get romantically involved with Jay, He’s excellent friend material for Jay, but I don’t think lover/boyfriend chemistry really possible. Very thoughtfully done and thanks as I know you’ve worked hard on this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Jay is now entirely as unlikable as Eric, Jess, Nick, etc. His actions are so far beyond bad decisions. They are hurtful and destructive. Louis is way more than Jay deserves so a huge part of me hopes Louis won’t accept Jay’s fucked up mess and forgive his errors. We’ll see…

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I'm just a gay dude from Cape Town, South Africa, flexing my writing muscles and putting out some stories about cute guys falling in love, hoping to make some money off of them one day so I can write instead of work. That's the dream. Thanks for reading One More Year! (Assumi...

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