All Comments on 'One More Year Ch. 23'

Bloody brilliant

Oh my this is so awesome. Jay and Louis together am so excited. So emotional right now. Jay finally getting his words out.

The previous chapter had me crying because Jay who is so brilliant otherwise couldn't express himself to Louis. Waiting to see how this develops.

Btw I read chapter 1 and 2 while awaiting this chapter... love the story well done.

You have captured all the awkwardness and emotions that can happen at that age.

Great story

Yes! Yes! Yes! Finally

Love the chapter, glad Jay and Louis finally talked it out. Makes me miss my grad party, I didn't expand my friend circle until my senior year so it hit close to home when Jay's mom pointed that out haha

Yes!!!! Yes!!! Yes!!! Totally just made my Monday!

At last!

LOUIS! Louis, Louis, Louis!!! I nearly melted too, Jay. I couldn’t agree more with the first comment: Bloody Brilliant, BradleyScott …

Thanks everyone! Reading all these got me in such a good mood. 🥰

I don't know what the hold-up with the next chapter is - 23 and 24 were actually supposed to release on Saturday and Sunday (the 11th and 12th, that is) but clearly... they didn't. 😁 I'm never sure how much self-promo I'm allowed to do where. (Which may be responsible for some of the delay of this one, at least.)

But I know I can in my bio, so be sure to check it out after the last chapter drops, because their may (*cough* WILL *cough*) be a little bit of bonus "One More Scene" before you have to say goodbye to all these characters for the year, but it won't release here. So find out how to get it (for free, don't worry) in my bio! 😉

Thanks so much for reading, and enjoying - the comments and the excitement mean the world to me. 💖💖💖

What a great story! I’m thoroughly enjoying it and appreciate your writing skill.

As you commented on the last chapter, I do think a sequel where Eric gets it together could be good. I see Eric differently than some. I think he is struggling to come to terms with his identity when his father and others make it fee unacceptable. I think he could use more compassion from his friends. But in the meantime, Louis is awesome and I love where the sorry is going.

Yay!!!

Finally!!!!!!