All Comments on 'One Night in Melbourne'

Great build up, slow but a real turn on. Great writing, great descriptions of all the men, their bodies, their beautiful cocks. Hope you carry on. With that flight home?

I loved this well-written story for so many reasons: I'm from Melbourne, I haven't been to Swanbourne Beach in Perth (but I've been to Sunnyside North just south of Melbourne many times). I too am married, I consider myself romantically straight but sexually I'm definitely bisexual. I've always loved beaches, swimming pools, changing rooms, public showers, etc. And also there was that incestuous angle at the beginning, I too can identify: my sister and I use to fool around a bit when the parents weren't around. I remember esp. when I was 18 and my sister was 20 she was almost obsessed with my cock. She loved to watch it go from smaller-than-average when soft to much-bigger-than-average when hard ("wow, it's huge!" etc.). Funny, she's probably forgotten all about those times now... wish I'd gone with her to Sunnyside with her back then.