All Comments on 'One Night in the Vampire Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I’d love to see another chapter to this describing his change and perhaps their first hunt together,atba hospital?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I loved the story, needs a conclusion, His conversion,first hunt and more or their conquests

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaos8 months ago

"Today you live. But if you ever want to come back and slide inside me again, you must tell nobody about me. Do you understand?" But if he is gonna be turning then why the 'if'. Also, he should have had a backup stake or something and just stabbed her with her when she asked him to slap her .-. But maybe she isn't so bad, she seemed alot less murdery after orgasming.

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