All Comments on 'One Night in Vegas Pt. 01'

by kali_s

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Enjoyable if unoriginal quickie

Fun but a bit mechanical and formulaic. I hope you add a bit more characterization and build-up to encounters in future chapters. Not to discourage you since I did like it - just trying to be constructive.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Next time you are in Vegas

Next time you are here I want to play. Your stories are so hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Bopeep loved this

I do wish it were longer though!

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I am a CD who, if I had been smart would have started to transition years ago. I don't see it happening now though :(