All Comments on 'One Night On The Town'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
loves the story

great story its not often you gat to read a bdsm story to do with loving wives i loved the story and hope there will be a next chapter telling us what the mistress did with donna throughout the week

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wrong ending

In the first place I don't seeing the wife leaving with a strange woman, period. That would have been the more plausible action and this silly tale would have been over before it started. And at the end, I would have preferred the husband show up and beat the shit out of Terri. She's a bitch and deserves it.

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