All Comments on 'One of the Depraved & Deplorables'

Not a voyeur but well written.

5 stars

Good until they waxed those beautiful hairy pussies, 50's start time didn't work so well as a timeline as it predates a lot of stuff you mention during the narrative. Just my thoughts

Dayum! That is about as perverted as it gets! In a good way, of course! 🤣

fun story, but uber was a bit anachronistic

1953? "

Timeline

I'd planned for a different story and needed it to take place before the internet and world wide web in the early 1990's. Some 1970's technology was going to be important too.

I find that stories have a life of their own, and I couldn't incorporate everything I'd planned in this effort.

I kept the dates. Sorry if I messed up and included things that didn't yet exist.

The good news, if you liked this work, is it'll take me two more chapters to tell the story I wanted to tell. Chapter two is with the editor/proofreader and chapter three is being written. r

Good story.....

* On another note... Bwahahahahaha OH MY GOODNESS (There was no such thing as an Uber in 1972 Lmao) however still a good read.

Great writing well done. I particularly like how slowly you built up the tension with your mother. Also the variety of body shapes.