All Comments on 'One of the Girls'

Very sexy. Love when Carla calls him a slut

love your trans stories, just wishing to read more. thank you

Seems like a match made in heaven. Hope you write more.

Good story. I loved it. To bad it was so short. I did find that you made an error in the story.

"They were all feeling a little tipsy as they stumbled into Carla's apartment."

It was really Tiffany's apartment. Proof read before you send next time. How about doing a sequel about them. Does Mike transition and becomes Tiffany's girl friend as well as lover? Or does Mike just become her boy friend? Or does Mike become a cross dresser so that he can be her boy friend and girl friend? And what does Carla add to the relationship of the two lovers? You could write several chapters about these characters.

So sweet and erotic, my legs are showing the best of the new order of things to do in the world of the forbidden fruit.

I love these stories,and crossdressers

For being a virgin at crossdressisng he was good at getting dressed and putting on makeup,Tiffany should have helped

I hope you continue this saga,

You don't waste too much time on foreplay do you! Like the stories and different situations. I didn't see this one coming or vumming. Love it!!

I like your story but it's a little weird that he immediately agreed to cross dress and weird that "he managed to apply just the right amount of blush, mascara, eyeliner, gloss and eye shadow". As a male, I have no idea what any of that those are. Write more please, I did enjoy the story:)

Great story, Mikayla is so lucky. What I wouldn't give to be her on that day.

What? A trans story where the guy is something other than a short dicked, fleshlight cum dump?

With some romance and caring thrown in?

Don't you know that all shemales are over sexed, horse cocked domineering rapists with more testosterone than a bull shark?

Sarcasm aside, this is a much better way to write a trans story. Could have had Tiffany put on his makeup though.

IMO

Perfect! Wish it could have been me.

Fabulous love story that is well written and was fun to read.

A must read!

What a wonderful way for Makayla to get introduced to cross dressing. Why did you continue to use masculine pronouns whenever referring him after Tiffany had christened him/her Makayla though? Kinda detracted from your otherwise steamy fantasy.