All Comments on 'One of Us Pt. 04'

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Joann69Joann69over 3 years ago

The story was great one more chapter would be perfect

EhsheehsheEhsheehsheover 2 years ago

Like the story can't wait for you to evolve further

LunaDoggyLunaDoggyabout 2 months ago

This is absolutely superb, and i'm referring to all 4 parts here. Hope to see more.

AnonymousAnonymous42 minutes ago

This was a very good story. I enjoyed the ebb and flow of the story. The punishment and outcomes of the story were fair.

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