All Comments on 'One to Die For'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
So......?

This has potential as a romance.

mtstorymtstoryalmost 16 years ago
great

Wonderful story. Great place to stop. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
nice work

Sweet story. If you're up for it, a second chapter could be a nice bit of resolution.

-- KK in Texas

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Great start and it could happen -

Nothing "normal" about hand jobs - but nothing wrong with the right situation either (personal opinion of course - the professional side is all Maria lol)

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

Why can't I get lucky like that!

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

During the time I worked at a hospital, some of the nurses were kind of blunt about things sexual. Not too many could be embarrassed easily. There was always talk about the backroom shenanigans going on during the night shifts, nothing I was ever involved in though, darn it. Nice start, looking forward to the next chapter.

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Nice simple story, nice descriptions, characters and plot

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