All Comments on 'One White Rose'

I know that it would be difficult in this particular story but I don't generally like stories without dialogue. My feeling is that if I am going to write about sex; doing it, describing it and loving it, the characters should give voice to their basic feelings and needs.

Never mind, it was quite a nice little story but if you are going to continue it needed to have a 'hook' hinting at the next part, like possibly the couple she saw entering the cabin next door and waving to her in the hot tub.