All Comments on 'One Whore's Town Ch. 05'

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ThrillherbrysonThrillherbrysonabout 1 month ago
Very Promising and Enjoyable

Hey I haven't finished reading this chapter quite yet, but would love to provide some feedback for the series as a whole. There should be scenes for characters besides Betty. Having all erotic scenes be exclusive to her doesn't really work well in my opinion for a story revolving around a brothel. So if any of the other girls have relations with anyone, the reader should know what's happening.

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