All Comments on 'Online Addiction'

I love it!

Great story but needs to continue. Very hot

This is a really hot story. It's really creative the way you have one women who got herself into this situation and a second women who is a totally innocent victim. Please continue. It might be interesting to have them each meet a guy (or guys) while they are helplessly wet and allow themselves to be used. Perhaps one of the girls are used by someone they previously clashed with who now has a chance to humiliate her by "making" her go to a party with him while she is topless or nude. She begs him to use her as his slut and gets a tattoo "Jim's willing slut"

Very nice!

Very short and wasn't written well

you need to describe how the girls are feeling more, rather than just say 'and she felt good'...