All Comments on 'Only Consenting Adults Ch. 12'

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joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking7 months ago

Their repartee is so cute. And I'm excited to find out more about Staunton.

oneagainstoneagainst7 months agoAuthor

Thanks, they do seem to really like each other, hey? It was a lot of fun to write. And yes, on Staunton... the threads come together now, from this point, all the way to the end.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I have just started re-read “Pride and Prejudice” and I am stuck by the similarities with your work — I have a suspicion you have also read Austen, possibly during the shutdown.

I get pissed off when stories in an arc don’t get respectable ratings, when they are advancing the plot (and contain pointers, FFS!)

I enjoy Eve’s arc, because she nudges so many boundaries and keeps the balls in the air. Keep it up!

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