All Comments on 'Only Time Ch. 01'

As usual and yet a return to better form I really enjoyed this story WW. The pace was fast yet it wasn't a shorter read like some of your pacier stories tend to be. I have one question. Do you choose how the spacing on your paragraphs are or is it coincidence that To Be Continued ended up on its own page. Clever work if it was you. Thanks for this WW!!

Wow, Your stories keep getting more exciting, intriguing, and fascinating!

Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

The Ambulance was a suicide car bomb, Father Romano is dead and Dr. Laura is injured badly.

The next chapter is submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.

Man u never cease to amaze me with ur ability to make me want more

This is such a great start to another chapter with the iron crowbar Ur awesome please keep em coming sooner rather than later. Great job..

Currently re reading all your stories. Love the mystery and intrigue. Well done WW.

You just keep doing this to us. Great story, can't wait to see what kind of Hell the Iron Crowbar unleashes on the "Cartel".

No, I did not plan that formatting thing, and I have no control over it. In fact, if I'd known it would do that, I'd have done something to prevent the last page to only be 'to be continued'.

Somehow I missed the first chapter, so now I'm off to read the second one.

yet they put you in jeopardy because of their ;professions. TK U MLJ LV NV

WTF!

Cliffhanger!😠😠

Another attack. Life is tough for Don and family.

*****Wow this is getting so serious. Thanks for sharing.