All Comments on 'OnlyFamily'

I vote for ONLYFAMILY: 1 ST VIRGINITY TAKEN SHOW

Absolutely fabulous, I suggest you keep the format you have now.

Building it up one step at a time. 🤩🌶🤩

Yes definitely do more!!!

Very hot. Love these threesomes and the gradual education of the virgins. Hard to believe that such hot bodies get to be past 18 with few sexual experiences of any kind. This story kept me entertained and sexually involved with myself until the very end which came much too soon. I like all your suggestions for the future but don’t agree they should be shorter. Bring them on. Ill be back, but since I’m reading from beginning to end, it’s likely to be a long time so you can add much to this tale. Thanks.

Very erotic and terrifically funny. I don’t think this should be taken seriously because it’s full of delightfully dark humor. But I’m a little bent. My wife got it but my kids think I’m a pervert. Both daughters enter the house with the warning: Put some pants on, Dad.

The ideas for your future chapters are exceptionally HOT! The Lesbian Show would be improved if Marty takes both of their pussies in turns while they are licking clits.

Keep up the Great Work and hope you win the NND contest.

Yes please!

PLEASE, PLEASE continue this! The family orgy show could be epic! There’s so many ways that could go. I’m curious which son will be more dominant, Marty or his cousin? Maybe Marty should be brought down a peg? Just my own thoughts, you do what you do best. Fabulous detail as usual. Never heard of this phase before “Jill off.” I like it!

Great story (as usual) - Thanks!

Think follow-ups would be fun. Keep them cumming! In keeping with the story line, the characters need to make sure they don't "give" away too much and keep earning the money they need.

More stories - Paying off the house? Paying off the cars? Taking care of the financial advisor(s)?

mfj

This is a fantastic story! Hoping an encore is with us soon

Cant wait for the next chapter. More of this lots more of it!

Loved it. Would love to see you move directly to the inter/intra family Orgy Show. Seems that many possibilities open up in that scenario.

Thanks for the story.

Loved it! Please make more! 😍

Looking forward to all future installments.

Nice one, please include leather fetishwear and catsuit as well. Maybe even cake crushing, damn my fantasies coming out in spurts here. Amazing story, eagerly awaiting new chapters

I absolutely loved it please continue with:

ONLYFAMILY: 1 ST VIRGINITY TAKEN SHOW

As that would be so hot

Another great story and can’t wait to see the next update

More!!!!! So hot!

this could be a great serial story. MORE!!

(Im)patiently waiting for more. Much more! :)

Looking forward to the next episodes!

That was one super hot story and I know we all want more, much more!

Great story as always. Eagerly waiting for more in any of the themes you listed.

whatever you do, please don't bring another male......

Can't wait for the next family exploits!

Hopefully there’s more coming.

Bill S.

OMG! Yes - to All your ideas!!

Awesome!! Five stars and a favorite point!

This is another one of your hot stories and it definitely needs a sequel. It can't stop until Marty has each hole on both women, all live, then the private relationships begin. This could include pregnancy for both. You write extremely well and have a great sense of adventure, it makes it easy to read and also "enjoy". Hey, at least there's no pages to get stuck together, lolol. Thanks again for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍

409. I read this 7 months ago but didn’t number it. I said at the time I was planning to number my readings of this delightful author and that it would take a while to get back here. So here I am. Love this story and looking forward to more of your suggestions especially the orgy. This one ended too quickly.

Started reading and I didn't see it mentioned, what is their hair color?

I can't stop stroking my cock.It's making me so horny.Please continue writing more if it.Hope none of my family comes home.

Nice story line. Can not wait for more.

You misted the chapter where get to breed his mom!

Great story. The future chapters sound hot. Especially the orgy one

GREAT story so far. Need to join the on line fans to witness Tyra's deflowering. Please don't keep us waiting . . .

It's a gggrrreeeaaattt start of a epic series and maybe a few

spin-offs

🙊🙈🙉💨🤔

A fairly good start to the series. I see that you have already written the first two of the possible additional chapters that you mentioned and I look forward to reading them I'm sure that the video of Marty having sex with his mom will be very popular as will future sex between them. The family orgy show sounds like it has definite promise.

The writing is way too wordy - so much unnecessary dialogue. Really wish you’d use an editor to slice and dice into just the meat. Solid concept just needs heavy editing.

What a story!!!!!!!!