All Comments on 'Open Beneath'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

interesting and cute

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Interesting, tantalising construction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Something should have actually happened at some point in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You lost me at “up the butt girl.” And the way you kept saying “open underneath” kept taking me out of the moment.

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