All Comments on 'Open Sky'

Five.

It is a real shame that you have stopped writing the way you describe the act of making love with passion but also with tenderness. Just a shame.

The first half sounded almost exactly like my wife and I it was me who went to the deck and she came out in her filmy white vintage cotton poets dress. The lovemaking was spot on, as if I wrote it! Most likely I'd have cum faster, but it's always been a favorite of mine to lick her until she just starts her first contractions, as she just starts to cum, than I go ahead and push in, right through her clenching orgasm. I think she liked it, although it might have been too intense for her. In any case, that writing was great.

The next section, well, it didn't always go like that but if it's a greatest hits reel, than I'm down with it. I always loved to fuck her mouth, but she never wanted it rough, she couldn't take it past her gag reflex, that was a non starter, but in all ways she was great. I miss her, that's for sure.

Good story, it really felt real