All Comments on 'Opening Her Up'

The story is beautiful, I wish I was her.

I really liked this from her point of view. Very well written. I’d like a next chapter please

I found the story to be very stimulating as a voyeur and extremely stimulating as a submissive. It easily creates pictures in the mind which urge me to gratify my desires on seeing them. There was also hints of future interest for those of us who are spankers,,spankee's or voyeurs of the act. Thank you for a great opening.

This was amazing. Please write a next chapter.

I find this not original. I find this just another way of saying what a dom wants every time. It gets boring because there is no originality or personalization. There is nothing new, happy, respectful of the sub, or expecting any type of new outlook from either person. It seems to be the same old see-saw.

Very well written that’s exactly what a new sub should feel

To everyone who commented with encouragement, thank you! It's my first story here and this has been wonderful way to join the Literotica community.

To ShadowRosie, who found the story unoriginal, sorry it didn't work for you. I did my best. But not every story is for everyone. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

I'll be submitting more work soon. And given requests for additional installments, I'm thinking about ways to add to Elaine's story too.

Best wishes,

AnaisRim

Wonderful!

Thank you so much

Please write more