All Comments on 'Operation Chameleon Ch. 01'

First story of the profile and an excellent introduction. Waiting for next chapters only wishes if chapters have more pages.

It seems the training did not clear up a lot of her apprehension. as the start spoke of her trying to run away but too scared to do so. Great Introduction. Hero; Anti Hero;

and of course the unknown actor. 5s

All well, interesting and good. Then, the repeated use of exclamation ! gets stale and happens to be distracting! Refrain please!

Not a bad story, but cuy WAY back on the exclamation points. Made the story less enjoyable with everyone so ramped up. Its like they were all shotgunned a case of red bulls each before the meeting.