All Comments on 'Operation Chameleon Ch. 01'

Not a bad story, but cuy WAY back on the exclamation points. Made the story less enjoyable with everyone so ramped up. Its like they were all shotgunned a case of red bulls each before the meeting.

All well, interesting and good. Then, the repeated use of exclamation ! gets stale and happens to be distracting! Refrain please!

It seems the training did not clear up a lot of her apprehension. as the start spoke of her trying to run away but too scared to do so. Great Introduction. Hero; Anti Hero;

and of course the unknown actor. 5s

First story of the profile and an excellent introduction. Waiting for next chapters only wishes if chapters have more pages.