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Click here"Your Highness! Your Highness!" A scout cried out to her as he came galloping towards them, trailed by a string of refugees. "News from Heste!"
"What is it? Is their army marching already?" She hadn't expected them to be this quick. She assessed they were still months from being ready.
"No Your Highness, it's a letter, signed by all the Northern Lords, pledging fealty to King Henry Ousten, calling for Belkor to be deposed, and offering to join the Thestan-Sandoran alliance in defeating the orcs once and for all!"
Phillipe grinned at that. "Well that's a stroke of good luck! Do you think the rebellion will spread to the rest of Heste? Or even into Zentara?"
"We'll have to see. We can hope so. But one thing is for certain: this war is just getting started." Amelie looked out to the column of refugees. "Go and see if there are any leaders among them, particularly Rosalind from the Lainaird Tribe. Hers was the first messenger summoning us to the fight."
A short time later, Phillipe returned with an older man and two heavily pregnant women. The elder one's red tresses spilled messily in front of her face, tangled and knotted with dirt and sweat. The deadness in her eyes made Amelie flinch, since in it she saw the look of powerless you can feel only if you once had power.
"Your Highness, this is Rosalind of the Lainaird Tribe, and her niece, Melanie. They lead the tribe. And this is Black Pete. He has been leading the free fighters remaining and managed to liberate some of these prisoners after the main army left their town."
"Greetings, Rosalind. I'm Queen Amelie of Thesta. I regret not being able to get here sooner, but it took time to gather a force capable of defeating the orcs."
For a long moment Rosalind said nothing, and just looked down at the bloody earth. Finally she dragged her eyes up to Amelie. "I'm sure you did the best you could. Is Agmar dead? Did you find his body?"
"Yes, it's not far from here actually." She didn't tell her that she was the one who killed him. She had long since outgrown celebrating in death, or in being applauded for killing.
"Good. Good." Rosalind wrapped her arm around Mel and held the girl tight. With the news of his death a fire began to smolder inside her. "I want the body; it's going to be the kindling for a holocaust which will consume every half-breed bastard in the Hills. No one tainted with orc blood will live in these Hills, I swear it by the Abyss. I don't know how many of our men have survived, Your Highness, but I pledge them all to your army, to slaughtering the orcs and delivering to them the carnage they've inflicted on us. Tell me there will be no mercy, Amelie, tell me won't stop until their backs are broken, their horses lamed, until all the Lands and People are safe!"
A long war indeed, she thought. What will become of us by the end of it?
- COMMENTS
OrcDominionabout 6 years agoAuthorI did consider making orc cum an aphrodisiac, but by the time I thought of it, it seemed a little late to suddenly introduce that concept.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI've always felt there must be some addictive/special properties to orc cum, or maybe pheromones. With all the talk about how gigantic they are, and as rough as they are with the humans and elves, there's a nagging problem with how fast the slaves heal and how addicted women seem to become. Pleasure is all well and good, but a few strong orgasms is hardly going to break the will of a noblewoman and turn her into an orc whore.
It'd be cool if there was some yet-unexplained mechanism, a rationale that explained why this seems to happen to human and elf women. Having read the entire series, that's the one thing that just snaps the suspension of disbelief.
OrcDominionover 6 years agoAuthor"I feel like the orcs are totally gonna breed out of control. Like how are humans and elves not going extinct 400 years in the future?"
I don't want to give too much away, but that is something I've thought about and will be addressed!
Anonymousover 6 years agoI feel like the orcs are totally gonna breed out of control. Like how are humans and elves not going extinct 400 years in the future?
Also, orcs are like, not the types to have long periods of peace. Especially since I think they only managed to not beat each other up because the terrifying grandmother Jeanette is watching over her children like a vulture, keeping them on a very tight leash.
The moment she died of old age, shits are going down >=D
OrcDominionalmost 7 years agoAuthorJeanette did think his vision was plausible for the Catabrian Tribes. It wouldn't have worked for Thesta and Sandora. Agmar might very well have been successful if Amelie hadn't intervened.
Whether that was wise or not, you'll have to judge for yourself after reading Triumph. Chapters should beging getting submotted in 2-3 weeks.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoDid Queen Jeanette give this task of subduing these people to Agmar because she genuinely believed Agmar could rule this region competently? Or was she setting him up for a fall to rid herself of a dangerously unstable psychopath in her court?
syd_v63almost 7 years agoYour first two stories were well done and you managed to build quite the fan base. Your other stories paled in comparison and I thought honestly your best stuff had been written. These first three chapters seemed to be more fetish material than story, an excuse to write hardcore BDSM and nothing more. This chapter brings back the intrigue and twists that make for good story telling. Leon Trotsky once said "The Mob needs its blood" an acknowledgement to the harsh reality of change and anger when tyrants are over thrown and thoughs who have no power suddenly find themselves powerful. Agmar represented that rage, never truly having power, never truly being respected, he lashed out violently and violently he died. The mob needs its blood, but blood lust must give way to reason or it will consume itself.
Well done
xenoveistalmost 7 years agoWow cool, didn't expect Agmar to actually die. I'm looking forward to Amelie getting taken down and humiliated in the sequel, along with Rosalind haha, although I'm not sure if you're still going the darker route.
In a way I also get not wanting the orcs to win either since they are sort of dicks now. In the first series both Jeanette and Turogg were sort of underdogs coming in since there was another villain to put them against. Now that Jeanette's basically queen bitch it's not as fun to root for her.
Ah hell here's hoping everyone loses somehow in the smuttiest way possible ;)
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoAnd thus ends the reign of King Agmar, having never knocked up his slutty mother queen Jeanette with his own incestuous, half breed, greenskin bastard.
A true tragedy.
OrcDominionalmost 7 years agoAuthorI'm glad you both liked the series. I really enjoyed writing this one! More so than Elfin Descent. Triumph should begin in a couple of weeks. The first chapter is basically done, but I want to get a couple of chapter head start so I have more time to get each chapter edited before posting.
Yes, Triumph will be the last story. I do have ideas for another one set 400 years in the future, but I am not going to commit to writing that as I have other projects that I want to work on.
