All Comments on 'Orchid Ch. 01'

Of course he dumped her. He used her. Duh! Did you really think that was a surprise or worthwhile ending? UGH!

And this would be why I don't care for men...

It's only chapter 1! There's about 3 more to go! (Probably!)

Can't wait to read more. Amazing writing.

The romance was too good to be true and Calvin provided the expected twist. Now it remains to be seen what future their relationship has.

I can't wait to see where you take it next!

Love the story so far!

Must admit, I read it once and then dressed up en femme with a glass of wine to re read and become part of the story, beautiful.

Marie

Extremely good writing! Great story. Thank you.

I guess the gentleman put on a dress and then got fucked in his anus.

Clever premise for a story, I must say. Never seen anything similar before! Thanks for showing some creativity and imagination!

Kit's emotional ride is so beautiful and human and it makes this such a great story. I can't wait for chapter 2!

God I loved that! Great work

please let there be more , love the ride.

The third and final chapter is posted. This entire, completely story is posted and submitted to Lit. If you are so moved, please take a minute to vote on the chapters as you go. You'll make my day.

I enjoyed the subtle way you introduced Dominance and submission into the relationship. It was sweet and fun. Both Calvin and Kit were (in many ways) too good to be true. So, the ending was a nice relief from that tension, and sets up chapter 2 better. But, it’s a grand start! On to Chspter 2!

I'm a trans woman who struggles to put a lot of my thoughts and feelings into words. I loved the way you described many of Kit's thoughts, feelings, and experiences and your many of them track similarly with mine. Well done! I'll be sure to find the next chapter very soon.

I thougnt this would continue Eve/Everett,s story. I'm enjoying all this. I was worried at first when you wanted to be cut, you do mean the foreskin right.

Even though every cell in my body is singing for me to take hold and finish with him. You enjoy your dick as much as I enjoy mine.

Points for trying to make text look like text. Negative points because I didn't like reading it in that format.

They say that the biggest sexual organ is the brain. Well you fucked the hell out my mind. You are an awesome wordsmith, thank you.

I have, over the years, collected a lot of art (for this story and others). Be sure to check http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1496319 to see these characters and more!

Ohmigod so sweet! Almost all the way to the end. I was waiting for the same characters than in the previous chapter? But no matter, this was excellent in any case. And I know exactly what the feel of somethingness is.