All Comments on 'Organism Ch. 03'

i'm hooked

One can nitpick, but the big hole in the story so far is that the omnipresent ship AI does not bother to inform the crew about any of these events, including the death of a colleague.

If this isn't addressed later on, some passable explanation should be revised in.

I hope you go into detail on Jacob condition soon on if he's a fusion of his mind and the creatures, the creature using his memories to pretend to be him, or a very advanced style of mimicry with no evil intent behind it. I wonder what you tell us it'll be.

This is heavily derivative..."Alien" with a splash of sex. Might as well have an orgy on the Nostromo.