All Comments on 'Organism X Ch. 07'

I love the ongoing tension in this story. The possessed aren't so strong that they can just steamroll through and they still get messed up by their hubris.

I've really enjoyed reading this story and I check back daily to see if it's updated. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

This series is really great. I love the story and I look forward to the next chapter

This chapter is warmly delicious .

Usually stories of this nature aren’t well portrayed online, but you have done an excellent job of balancing tension with the actual sexual moments, great story and hopefully there’s more to come!

I enjoyed reading this back when you were putting it out and I’ve just got to wonder what’s happened? Was this a cliffhanger end or is it going to continue?

I really apologize for the last couple months. I lost motivation for the story and then got hit with a bunch of stuff irl that sapped all my time. That being said, I'm almost finished the draft for chapter 8 once and for all. It's going to be a much smaller chapter, but I've got a lot planned after that chapter. I've also got some ideas for other stories that I want to pursue and publish on here. My hope is to get chapter 8 up within the next two weeks. If I can do it sooner, I absolutely will. Hopefully I can work out a better system so the updates are much more regular than they have been.

This chapter is long and full of hotness. I usually don't read stories or chapters that are too long but this is an exception. Love the effort put into it.

This is a well written story, but there are some ongoing errors such as incorrect word use, most likely due to autocorrect. It's also becoming difficult to keep track of the character ensemble. We also have no information about the alien organisim, it's motivation, biology, or psychology. Hopefully future chapters will shed some light.

Other than that, well done.

Well there are now 10 girls hosting a parasite. The male body counting is rising with 8 students and 3 military/paramilitary. I hope you leave Felica as she is. The red parasite does not appear able to exercise total control over the host like the green parasite. If so, it would not have let Felica kill the parasite because of the remorse, guilt, and hating what she had become and done. When Megan felt the same way over killing Brad and his roommate her green parasite sent her into and endless loop of organisms which broke any resistance. This resulted in Megan embracing the pleasure the parasite was giving her over anything else. Will any of the other hosts develop secondary powers like Emily, Lindsay, and Leah? Well I guess poor Lily is going to find out what it is to be a lab rat. There is going to be a battle over the leadership of the group between Leah and Megan. Leah has been MIA and Megan has lead the conversion of the last 4 hosts. I am to assume that Felica turned Lily and the 2 of them killed the 4 male students? Is Megan the only one to be able to grow a red parasite? The personalities of Megan, Lindsay, and Emily have become the polar opposite of what they were before becoming a host. All 3 are now sadistic, mean, and totally uncaring about anything but satisfying their parasite's needs. I can ot wait for chapter 9. Wardmaster 91C70

What a wicked mind you have! I love it! Thanks for your time and imagination.

The hottest and most erotic chapter of the series so far.