All Comments on 'O'Rileys Nightclub'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A New Writing Star is Born!

Her's is a fresh new voice purring its way into the erotic world. She writes with the wit and verve of a female De Maupassant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very good

Very good twist in this tale :)

asiaprofasiaprofabout 17 years ago
The twist at the end...

Marks a great improvement over your previous works,

To flesh out the female protagonists with dimensions other than mindless sex-craxed bimbos!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
now this is a STORY!!

Kudos to this writer who reinfuses us with not just a wonderful tale of lust, but also with a unexpected comedic twist. Not many writers can do that, and you do it so admirably. Please continue writing wonderful stories like this.

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