All Comments on 'Orphan Ch. 09'

Thank Goodness you posted another chapter today, I was going into serious Orphan withdrawal.

I totally agree, cant wait for the next chapter...

This is one of my favorite series. Please, don't be a stranger.

Have been looking for next chapter and lo and behold it is here YAAAAAA! Thanks for another great chapter and thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work.

another fine read! things are getting closer to being unraveled!

Great job as always! Can't wait to see him face off against Bouchard and kick his ass :D

was alot of fun to read loved the history leason and can not wait for the next chapter

Loved it as usual...

Another marvelous chapter. Thank you for continuing this epic tale.

I wondered how you would handle his change, that was great! You are certainly building up to some serious drama and I'm loving it. Can't wait for more! DW

Another great Chapter Vjax. I love the pace of the story and the way things are going. Keep up the great work!

Fabulous chapter,I enjoyed it.

You have your audience(well at least me!) pawing the ground for more. I have enjoyed your stories, with the exception of just one thing..... i can hardly wait for the next installment. Thank you.

As usual, you have me wishing for the next installment even before it has been published!

Keep em coming

I am very curious about Alexander's origins. That will make an interesting story by itself, I am sure.

i have been waiting for weeks for this chapter.. its my birthday this week please post another for my birthday..lol i love this story....

please contenue when u can, i love it so far.

It is such a pleasure to read a story that not only shows a brilliant imagination, but a sound grasp of language and punctuation.

So many stories on lit begin from an excellent story line but are let down when ignorance of the written word and stilted punctuation make them hard to read. The enjoyment of the story can then be lost.

I look forward to the developments to come. :)

I like the way you build the story. Going to the almost intimate then back. Dropping the little teed-bits of info for another chapter. Looking forward to the rest of this series. BIG 5

I hate reading stuff like this that is not finished yet. I don't like waiting. Next chapter soon please

I love this story, and was so excited to see that you'd updated. I just recently found it and read all the previous chapters in a day, and like many of your other fans, I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Thanks for taking the time to write this!

loved it, looking forward to more

I love the story and I can't wait to find out what happens ! post another chapter soon !

Cross' mate if willow <3

Is willow , not if :)

I have noticed that in almost all your stories you mean one character but say another. It doesn't happen very often but from what i can tell it is around one or two times per three pages. It isn't hard to figure out who you actually mean normally but it would be nice if you would keep them straight so we the readers don't have to decipher it.

Please continue with chapter 11 hopefully you are writing it now just have some major writers block. I would love to see more of your stories.

this tutorial leaves the door(s) open for much more

...to at least complete one of the best, well-written, entertaining, and compelling stories I have ever read. I hope whatever is happening in your life that took you from writing was a very good thing. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Vjax can you please finish the story. It's really good