by craig69dp
Put tags on your stories, damnit
Some people, (includes me) are offended by
the inclusion of anal play......
It appears some writers NEED to overflow the pot
so that every "kink" is catered to in order to score
points....ZERO for your effort
Damn kids. Not even old enough to understand tags, which puts them around 4th grade...
Sorry fantasies should be left where they belong in fantasy land no one and I mean no one is fucking my wife.
I don't care for the detailed sex scenes but I was willing to give 5★ solely based on a loving wife spending a romantic weekend with her husband. Until. When you dropped the barely "legal" (regardless of just turning 18 some parents would rip your balls off for inviting their kids to play) boys into the soup. You totally added too much salt with their addition and this feast became a fiasco. I dropped to 1☆immediately.
Loved it. My first DP in front of my husband happened at a neighbor's yard party after all had left except him, his wife, and a neighbor who was single. We had swapped once before with the couple, and a fivesome ensued, with me eventually DPed by the other husband and the single guy. My ass was sore for a week, but I craved the eroticism of the DP.
If you read through the comments and take out those which are just poorly expressed shouts about their personal likes and dislikes, there are some good tips. Don’t try to get every sex act into one short story, and do tag your stories.
Hopefully they were infected with HIV. Then at least they will have a lasting memory! 1*!