Our Family Vacation Ch. 14

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As for future stories about Abby and her family I do have a few ideas for follow up series. The first would take place not long after this series and focus on Abby's Dad as he takes advantage of Susan's request he fuck five other women; and of course some of what the rest of the family is up to. The second sequel series isn't as thought out, but would take place a few years into the future to show how the family's new dynamic has progressed. If you would like to see these later tales or if you think the story should end here let me know. However, if I do write any continuations of Abby's tale it may be a while before I get to it because I want to try to get back to some of my other stories that I've neglected while writing this one; and on that note if there is a particular one of my other stories you'd like to see me finish first please let me know.

And finally I want to thank all of you who took your time to read this story to the end. I want to give a special thanks to all of you who responded to Chapter Nine's question on which way to continue this story. It was pretty much unanimous that I go with option 1 where the family all learn of Abby's naughty deeds, and I hope you enjoyed the way I played it out. ]

The End... for now at least

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Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearabout 4 years ago
What's next?

Like the couple other comments I've made, this is as far as I've gotten so far.

First, I want to say thank you, I've truly enjoyed this series and I will enjoy the last chapter too, I'm sure.

Second, on the possible continuation of the family, I can think of a few possibilities, one should be if it doesn't happen in the last chapter (family orgy) then the next part should be another family orgy say a month or two later where after ALL 3 females get "air tight" Danny proposes to Tina. Next should be daddy's 5 (maybe a sister or in-law) could be apart of the 5. Next could be Abby's friends with Jack, or even with both Abby and Jack. Then maybe Tina could have a little brother that joins her Danny and Abby on his 18th birthday. Now that everyone has a partner (that everyone is in LOVE with) we have Danny's wedding. Batchelor party featuring the girls and then bachelorette party featuring the guys. (Good time for sex games, costumes, and stripping) then the honeymoon, could do ALL go to hedonist in Jamaca, maybe another road trip, featuring the Truck Stop, Vagas and another amateur strip show at Dale's place, ending at a place they can all enjoy each other. Finally a few years in the future maybe some kids on the way for the younger couples or another engagement, just something that says they all live happily ever after.

Final note: this series is the first work of yours I've read, I like it. I am favoriting you and will be looking to read more of your work.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Read all of it!

Very hot and well constructed. You need a new editor, though. I'd be willing to help you if you want.

The only down side was Danny and Jack with their shower dare. If it had continued further, I would have stopped reading. I hope there are no plans for guy/guy in your upcoming orgy chapter. That having been said, I am looking forward to Susan getting the treatment and hopefully Abby eating some cream pies!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent!

Well done!

bulok1979bulok1979over 4 years ago
family orgy

family orgy is what i thought would happen. but i think you ended it too soon

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81over 4 years ago
Poor jack

I say decent job but poor Jack got the shaft so far. Talk about being left out and forgotten.

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