All Comments on 'Our Family's Cabin Pt. 02'

This is a well composed and very hot story to me! I live in Maine and my partner has a cabin on Long Pond. Her family has also had a camp on this lake a little further up since she was a girl. She has some voluptuous sisters and on occasion we’ve jested about me fucking them. This has never happened, of course, but your story revived the fantasy in my brain. Wow! Loved every bit of it and hope you continue the story! Can’t wait to read of Grey and Kelly fucking! And more!

The only critique I have is the amount of typos. Please proofread your story better and try to eliminate as many as you can. I would offer to help if you’d like. Cheers!

I wouldn't mind my wife sharing her sister with me.

I am looking forward to what happens with Kelly. So far this is a great story. Keep it up.

We need some pregnancies

good ongoing story

You need to polish to the story better. There are many words which don't belong because you're only using a spell check to edit the story. Get an editor or read out loud to yourself. You'll find the mistakes with ease that way.

I am enjoying your series. My one comment would be, don't rely on spellcheck to catch your errors. For example "navigate inside her whole".

Great story please continue

Hoping for lots more chapters, involving Kelly and Renee at he same time.

Teach Renee to kiss and whatever other sexual acts one can imagine.

5 stars,

Oh this is goood... Can't wait for next chapter... Found a few typos, but getting past them wasn't too hard or distracting. The storyline and progression is great though. Keep it up.. You have talent.

Exciting and awesome, can't wait for more. Hurry!

Great story. I hope you keep it going.

These are great stories, but, please get a Beta reader. The mistakes just jerk you back to reality.

Thank you all for the advice, I will certainly seek editorial support in the future.

Great start to what could be a very good series.

Very good, I'm enjoying it so far. Really want to see him having all 4 of them at the same time, and hope there's a few chapters until that.

Keep up with the good work.

Love it, hoping for more!!

P.S. it's clitoris

Absolutely keep going. You gotta fuck those nieces...

Great story so far but as others have pointed out there are words to are spelled incorrectly. I agree that an editor could really help you polish up the coming chapters.

Totally hot. I need more

Hot buildup, but my comment from chapter 1 remains - none of Sandy's behavior makes sense in the context you presented it. Was her intent of opening her marriage all along meant to free her to chase her bi side? 5*

Fix your spelling errors for Christ's sake. A quick read through would catch most of them. Its clitoris and harem you dolt. Also all that king talk is super corny.

Great story so far only wish they were 1 or 2 pages longer.

Keep up the great story. Matt

Need to see more push/pull flirting, some level of challenge in seducing these women. Women don't give it up that easy.

@Demos thank you for the feedback. I will certainly try to address this in some capacity. As this is my first story I’m still working on making sure what is in my mind makes it onto the page. Thank you for the advice and I hope I can get you back into the world.

@person who didn’t like the lesbian scene. Thank you for your comment and feedback. I do feel that Grey took pleasure in both watching and having two women he loves engaging in sexual activities. I also enjoyed thinking about it and as I outline what other directions this will go I do believe there may be more ff or fff or even ffff activities. With Grey involved of course.

Great Story! I’ve added you to my favorites list. Waiting for the next part. It’ll be interesting to see what happens with the young nieces and their aunty and uncle….and mom. 5 ⭐️

I can’t wait for the next part

Thank you for taking the time to write this story. I personally enjoy it very much, I understand some people don't but that's not my concern. I hope you continue with it and don't get discouraged by any negative feedback.

So very, very hot! 5 Stars.

Ignore the guy about the lesbian scene, it was perfect

Awesome story! Good build up so far, and I'm glad to see wifey's interest waking up. That definitely makes it better!

Love where this is going keep ‘em coming

Loved it.

Please alsonbring karen's husband ad sandy sex. Y karen & greg have all the fun

Great story! Can't wait to see where the Kelly story line goes. There were a few spelling and editing mistakes that I noticed, but other than that, it's very well written! Keep up the good work!

I love this. Looking forward to chapter 3

WOW! This story is hot! I think I blew 3 loads reading this. I cant wait for more!

A fine tale and can't hardly wait for more. Please please continue a great tale

clitoritis

I hope that you take care of all of them.