All Comments on 'Our First Couples Massage'

Oh dear. When a writer has a dumb mistake in the first sentence you just know it's going to go downhill from there.

Another 12 year old manages to post in LW.

Are you going for the 'most mistakes per page' prize? You're a top contender.

Interesting and Enjoyable story. Don’t pay attention to the needlessly negative comments. Do take the time to reread the story to catch any errors.