All Comments on 'Our First Threesome'

Two pussies to play with. Keep them both filled with his cum

Nice premise.

Good beginning.

Would have liked to see more conversations between the women, discussing what was going to be done, what was being done, did she like it? Sex at home moved too fast. Not enough descriptions. OK, panties off. He didn't see who did it. Why not? That could have been very erotic, particularly if there were some reluctance that needed to be overcome.

Jumping ahead isn't erotic.

Four stars.

Hot as Hell, more please!

I really liked your story. I liked the fact it was short and you didn't spend pages telling the reader exactly what was going on in everyone's mind. Wham, bam, thank you ma'am can be a very good thing. Thank you for sharing your story.

Very hot,