All Comments on 'Our First Threesome'

Pussies are stretchable. Babies come out of them and they’re not left 10” wide. So why do you think her pussy would be loose?

Are you trying to tell us that a woman who had children and who uses large dildos wouldn’t feel a finger or two slipping into her cunt?

That’s not how women’s bodies work.

Why does it seem that most MFM threesomes here end up in cuckold/humiliation? FMF rarely does. If anything, it seems that FMF is more fun for the wife than for the husband!

Nothing hotter than sharing your wife with another man who has a big thick cock.

I liked it! Ignore the haters. They don't contribute.

Much of your dialogue and commentary becomes monotonous and boring, because almost every sentence begins and sounds exactly the same.: Katee... I.... Dan.... They.... It's okay to write simply, but too many simple, declarative sentences all jumbled together is awful to read. You've got to vary the length, the rhythm and the meter of the words pouring into the reader's head. To you, it is perfect, but to a reader, it gets irritating. That's why you need an editor or at least a beta-reader.