All Comments on 'Our First Time by Veronica'

This is basically how it happened for my wife and I. We had some friends over for the Super Bowl and it became a group bang. Very hot for sure.

I know how Bill feels! Watching my wife get fucked is awesome! Great story.

"Firstly this is not an essay to be marked for grammar and spelling later."

Well, sorry sir*, but you don't get to choose what we comment on. Grammar is important. It makes your writing easier to read and understand.

That opening to a story is just an admission that your grammar sucks and you know it. The story is almost unreadable. Like wasing through mud.

It is also rather childish and the scenario has been written about here a 100 times, much better.

Another small point. You say that the vodka is frozen solid. Impossible. Vodka freezes at approximately -16℉ / -26℃. Domestic freezers do not get anywhere near that cold. Anyway, having claimed that, you then were immediately able to pour and drink the solid vodka. Pay attention to your own story!

* Yes. I'm, fairly sure this was written by a man.

Awesome story I loved it , so natural , an real

My husband and I have a poker night it always ends up with me being air tight and covered in cum only if their wife’s knew what makes their husbands happy