All Comments on 'Our First Time MMF Ch. 02'

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eightintooleightintoolalmost 3 years ago

Looking forward to a chapter 3 if you ever get around to it :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Chap 3 please

reddancerreddancer8 months ago

With all of the crap the editors gave me when I submitted my first story, and I have excellent writing, punctuation and grammar skills, I am constantly amazed when I read stories like this one with punctuation and grammar mistakes all the way through. Evidently the editors don't go through every story submitted and send it back to the authors for correction.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

A great bisexual start ruined with cuck fetish.

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I am not a writer so please don't criticize my stories. Been on HRT for over a year. Married couple with supportive wife. Wanting to chat and meet like people/couples.

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