All Comments on 'Our Holiday in Yorkshire'

I was pleasantly surprised to see that you had posted another story, after a long hiatus. This tale makes great reading. Lisa's surprise is delightful as is John's satisfaction at having her submit to another man.

I have re-read "At The Conference" many times and have hoped that you might pen another chapter or two. It would be very interesting to read that Sid had followed our couple and was bent on having Angie at his disposal yet again.

Please keep adding to your body of work. It is most appreciated.

welcome back i had hope you were struck dumb or something but who would know you cornered the market on being dumb, hard to keep you sickos away from writing when you have no pride you'll do anything.

Another wimp/cunt /cuck storry , thank god for non faggy brits like Average_Writer that are real men .

Great description and impeccably paced

His long time marriage has taken a new twist if she does what she said she is going to do .

Will she act like a cock hungry slut or will she just let other men fuck her while her husband watches?

Either way he will have a new baby to deal with, maybe after she delivers she will come around to what he wants her to be.

Thanks for the read.

About time too that you wrote a new story. The next one had better be soon as cannot wait years for it.

That was amongst my best reads, "ticked most of the box's" for me.

Oh to be a fly on your wall in yorkshire!! well done, look fwd to reading more.

Regards Geoff.

A well written and erotic story.

Great story, just wanted to tell you about the time my 26year old wife got drunk in the hotel bar because the waiters were putting vodka in her drinks.she went to the toilet and was missing for 30 minutes. It turns out that when she was on her way back a waiter took her to a private service area and started to kiss her while pressing his body against hers as they stood next to a wall, then he lifted up her skirt and put his hand between her legs. When she started to groan he pushed her knicker to the side and put to fingers inside her, he then started to finger fuck her so much that she unzipped his pants and put his Spanish cock inside her until they both came together. She then came back to me at the bar minus her White knickers and hot cum dripping down her legs. Her name is Christine Wilson from M40

I think her name was Christine...M40 area?

At the second coupling of Lisa and the tramp, he makes reference to have taken her earlier. At the end of the story, Lisa says she is pregnant by ONE of the two men. She didn't know there were two and, she was fucked by the one tramp twice.

Another moron husband is born. and another whore wife is let loose on the public. Hope they both end up with AIDS they would deserve it. otherwise all-in-all it was a good story a bit long but still good a good story.

Nice eroric story. Enjoyed it.

Please write some more. Your stories are really good and it is such a long time since the last one.

A.lovely, boring, nature walk, then you give your wife to a nasty tramp. You English are one nasty fucking people.

When does a man lose respect for his wife like that?

It was great until the pregnancy part ruined it.